Maybe my best friend is the most positive person in the world. It can be raining outside and she has no money but she can convince me to make the funniest plan ever. She's positive, always smiling, happy and has a lot of energy. She's tall as me but thinner and has a more rounded face, she has long hazel straight hair and beautiful brown eyes. I think everybody that knows her thinks the same as me, she is generous and would do anything for her friends. But when she's angry you better hide because she's terrible. Despite this i love her because she is like that, i'm so fortunate to have her.
Peer response for: Paula Férez
By: Jennifer Llavero
Dear Paula:
I like the description about your best friend because it is obvious how much you love her. It's interesting that you wrote that she is terrible when she's angry because you are not saying just good things about her and you are showing another viewpoint.
I know that we didn't have so much time to write the paragraph, but if i were you, the next time i would include some information about her appearance and maybe some phrases to say how do you think that people see her from the outside and how did you think she was when you met her.
It is good to know that nowadays there are people who knows how important is to have a strong friendship.
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